Second edit of Mum video

This is the second edit of my short film concentrating on my mum's memories. I have repeated the video of her writing her name instead of using a still freeze frame to accompany the voice over. This is an experiment to see if it helps the viewer stay interested, and enhances the viewing experience. Is the repetition more or less powerful than the still image? I have also used colour rather than black and white, again to enhance the viewing experience, was the black and white hiding the details that colour reveals, or did having the film in black and white help focus the audience, and create a more emotional piece? I will need time to review these questions in order to create a their image in response to this one. I will re-watch this edit a few times to be able to understand what I need to do next to improve the video.

You can view the short film here:http://youtu.be/mAbxVPydBQk